Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Rain, Joanna, and Poems :D

School was boring, I just wanted to sleep. :P I hate the rain, to much rain. Go away rain. Stupid rain -_-. But I'm working on a song about the weather (idea from Joanna Yan VISIT HER BLOGSPOT http://ch4pst1ck.blogspot.com/)

Poems are here :D
"And from this day" 02/24/09
Dedicated to Paul Mok

I may be a fool if I show this,
But I cannot hide that it's you I miss.
The world became cold on a summer's day,
And the color vision I use to have became gray.
The way you use to make me smile,
I always knew you went the extra mile.
The song you wrote replays in my head,
The words you spoke still makes me red.
You were always so busy,
But you were there when I felt dizzy.
And the way you sang every time I was down,
I couldn't help it but not to frown.
You strummed the melody that keeps me insane,
And from there, the emotions could not be explained.
Although I never thought it'd be true.
But from this day, I still adore you.
This is from the girl who kicks and shoves you for saying love.

"Not yet, I'm still fighting" 02/24/09
Dedicated to Mark-Ryan Nguyen
I'm lazy so it's a free verse

Born as a premature with a disorder.
Your estimated death was coming soon.
But surprisingly, you survived.
For two weeks, you haven't stop fighting.
You gave us hope and brought us a sign.
"Not yet, I'm still fighting."
As I saw you the day before your death.
You seem tired and restless.
The next day, you were gone.
But at least you're no longer fighting.
But resting in peace.
And this is the baby that had a death estimation of 3-4 hours.

1 comment:

  1. ooo, you actually took the weather suggestion X]
    I like your poems, you are good with your words!
    They rhyme and everything :X

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